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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 18:47:18 GMT -5
Post by Lunar Knite on Apr 11, 2007 18:47:18 GMT -5
If only this was not reality, If only this was just fantasy, A nightmarish dream come true, For I could never live without you.
Swept away from my hold, Freed of my embrace, A dark and chilly feeling, Looking at that empty space.
Never knowing what was had, I could not see the real you, For I was just blinded by beauty, Just staring at the view.
But you caught on and left, Not a trace of you behind, I realized then, that I loved you, Not just for body, but soul and mind.
I figured it out much too late, My chance had passed away, And I’ve looked at that empty space, Ever since that fateful day.
Never again will I get that kiss But still I will wish, If only this was not reality, If only this was just fantasy.
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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 18:56:51 GMT -5
Post by jdog on Apr 11, 2007 18:56:51 GMT -5
Whoa..... Nice XD
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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 18:57:15 GMT -5
Post by Neon on Apr 11, 2007 18:57:15 GMT -5
I like it, Meh maybe the reason is that I am not poet and I can not write some thing like this XD.
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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 19:00:54 GMT -5
Post by Lunar Knite on Apr 11, 2007 19:00:54 GMT -5
Heh heh, thanks! I used to think I couldn't write. You just gotta put a lot of feeling into the poem though. Detachedness or just writing whatever does work out sometimes also. ^_^
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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 19:03:21 GMT -5
Post by Prinny Ramza on Apr 11, 2007 19:03:21 GMT -5
Seem to be connect to .hack, or may I wrong?
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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 19:03:24 GMT -5
Post by Neon on Apr 11, 2007 19:03:24 GMT -5
HA HA true meh maybe I'll give it a shot some time soon. Thanks for the advice Hartz.
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If Only
Apr 11, 2007 19:07:43 GMT -5
Post by Lunar Knite on Apr 11, 2007 19:07:43 GMT -5
Hehe, cool, no problem. If ya do try to write a poem, let me see it sometime, eh?
And Marche....errr, not really. I wasn't thinking about hack when I made it, but most works of poetry are open to interpretation, so it could be whatever you think. =P
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