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Post by Lunar Knite on Mar 1, 2007 21:59:04 GMT -5
Never did I realize what your smile meant, A soft, gentle smile that radiated your beauty, It always came on when I was near, But I was just too blind to see.
Never did I realize what you actually said, You needed a friend to lend an ear, To be accepted and comforted, But I was just too deaf to hear.
Never did I realize that you always listened, You weren’t the one I would seek, Willing ears to attend to my problems, But I was just too mute to speak.
Never did I realize what you really felt, Having pains you could not bear, To be abandoned by the closest ones, But I was just too numb to care.
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Been a while since I added a poem....
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Post by Lunar Knite on Jul 27, 2009 16:11:37 GMT -5
A slight revision to this poem. Just added two more stanzas yesterday. I think it's a little better now. So...comment, plz? :3
Never did I realize what your smile meant, A soft, gentle smile that radiated your beauty, It always came on when I was near, But I was just too blind to see.
Never did I realize what you actually said, You needed a friend to lend an ear, To be accepted and comforted, But I was just too deaf to hear.
Never did I realize that you always listened, You weren’t the one I would seek, Willing ears to attend to my problems, But I was just too mute to speak.
Never did I realize what you really felt, Having pains you could not bear, To be abandoned by the closest ones, But I was just too numb to care.
Never did I realize who you were, The truest of friends in every way, I couldn’t bring myself to admit it, But I was just to shy to say:
Never did I realize what I truly wanted, Although you were always around, I was looking for that special person, And it was you, I finally found.
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