Post by Lunar Knite on Jun 2, 2008 20:50:42 GMT -5
Well...I just thought that there should be a separate section for comments on Axel's new project, Power of Love. Axel has put in a lot of effort into this story, so I think some recognition is in order (besides just MSN talk).
I'll start off. So far, it looks very interesting. It is rather cliche in its cast of shown characters so far, but the premise of the main character is something a bit new. Right now, the genre seems to be a drama/romance, and while it may be funny if turned the way of harem, which it looks like it may, I hope you just keep it just one or two love interests. Don't make it that complicated. Anyway, I do like the character interactions so far. And right now, the teacher happens to be my favorite character just for the chalk incident.
As for some more criticism, I think a little bit more description of the surroundings would be nice. And for the unavoidable grammar commie-ness of me, make sure your dialogue punctuation is correct.
I'll start off. So far, it looks very interesting. It is rather cliche in its cast of shown characters so far, but the premise of the main character is something a bit new. Right now, the genre seems to be a drama/romance, and while it may be funny if turned the way of harem, which it looks like it may, I hope you just keep it just one or two love interests. Don't make it that complicated. Anyway, I do like the character interactions so far. And right now, the teacher happens to be my favorite character just for the chalk incident.
As for some more criticism, I think a little bit more description of the surroundings would be nice. And for the unavoidable grammar commie-ness of me, make sure your dialogue punctuation is correct.
